Monday, 18 January 2016

Instruction Writing

Over the last few weeks, we have been writing instructions. Can you use the things you have learnt to improve this instruction? 1. Go to bed.

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  1. 1. First, sensibly climb the stairs so that you can get to your bedroom.

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  2. 1. First, carefully go to your bedroom so that you wont fall over, then sensibly tuck yourself in so that you are nice and cuddly, then go to sleep.

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    1. Well done for adding adverbs, Prarthana. Don't forget your capital letters!

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    2. 1. First , carefully go to your bedroom so that you don't fall over. Then sensibly tuck your self in, so that you are nice and cuddly. Then go to sleep.

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    3. Brilliant! Well done!
      Could you add some numbers to split up the instructions?

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  3. 1.First carefully go up the stairs
    2.Then go in your bedroom.
    3.Finally go into bed

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    1. Well done for adding time words, Lilian.
      Could you add in a few more details?

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  4. I Really liked making the Torcs and Celts very much, but I loved making the roundhouses out of Play-do even though I struggled. I loved to making the roundhouses out of paper, it was hard work because I had to work on my own.

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  5. 1.furst cerfully go stairs and into your bedroom

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    1. Well done for adding a time word and adverb.
      Don't forget a capital letter!

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  6. 1.first get into your pyjamas.2.next brush your teeth.3.finally get into bed.

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    1. Well done for adding a time word to each instruction.
      Could you add some adverbs?

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  7. 1. First carefully walk up the stairs and turn left so you reach your bedroom

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    1. Super instruction.
      What would the next step be?

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  8. 1.First climb the stairs and put your pyjamas on and go to bed

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    1. Well done for adding a time word, Manasvi.
      Could you add an adverb?

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  9. FIRSTLY CAREFULLY CLIMB THE STAIRS 2.THEN BRUSH YOUR TEETH FOR 2 MINUITES HAVE A BATH 3.THEN GET INTO BED MAKE YOUR SELF WARM.

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    1. GO to your room and jump in your bed

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    2. GO to your room and jump in your bed

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  10. 1. First walk up the stairs sensibly.

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  11. First get into your pyjamas. Next brush your teeth so that they are nice and clean. After that wash your face and make it sparkle. Now take your hair bobble
    out and brush your hair. Read a book, then go to bed.

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  12. How to get ready for bed
    1. First go up the stairs.

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  13. 1. Carefully go to your bed so you wont slip.
    2. Sensibly go and tuck yourself in.
    3. Go to bed.

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  14. 1.First, sensibly and carefully walk up the stairs so you are in your bedroom.
    2.Next,tuck your self in so you are cosy and warm.
    3.Then settle your self down in to your bed.
    4.Last of all have sweet dreams.



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  15. 1. Firstly go up the stairs and hop into bed.

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  16. 1.Firstly go up the stairs and hop into bed.

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  17. choose a toothbrush put toothpaste on it then rinse in cold water, swill in mouth for one minit spit out you are done.

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  18. 1.go up the stairs carefully
    2.go to your room and put on your pyjamas
    3.go to the bathroom then get out your toothbrush also get your toothpaste and mouthwash
    4.then put your toothpaste on your toothbrush then put sum water on the toothpaste and put it in your mouth after that take it out and then spit it in the sink then put








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  19. 1.go up stairs carefully
    2.go to your room and put your fluffiest pyjamas
    3.go to the bathroom then get out your toothbrush also get tooth past and mouthwash
    4.then put your tooth past on you tooth brush and brush you teeth and spit it in the sink and put sum mouthwash in you mouth and spit it in the sink
    5.then go to bed

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  20. choose a toothbrush and put toothpaste on it rinse in cold water swill in mouth for 1 minit spit out and you are done.

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  21. 1.First climb the stairs then go to your bedroom and get in to bed.

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  22. 1. first go up the stairs and get on your pyjamas and go to bed at 07:30 pm 2. then go to the bathroom and have a wee 3.then think about your best story and then soon you will be a sleep.

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  23. 1. First gently walk up the stairs into your room go into your bed go to sleep.

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  24. HOW TO GO TO BED
    First go up the stair case then go to your bedroom and then go into your pyjamas after that go to your bathroom to brush your teeth then go to bed.

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